FallingShit
"title" fuck shit stack"?"
2008 Jul 11 • 226
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Word of a Gun
de shit heeft getroffen de ventilator
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2009 Feb 20 at 15:19 UTC
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Down Rodeo
Cap'n Moth of the Firehouse
2007 Oct 19 • 5486
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I found there were a few too many errors, but really, if you think that poems ought to be rated on 1-10 you're doing something wrong.
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2009 Feb 20 at 15:47 UTC
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It was nice but i wouldnt realy call it a poem. i would rate it with 6. 
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2009 Feb 20 at 15:48 UTC
— Ed. 2009 Feb 20 at 15:48 UTC
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Some of it is great, some of it is not so great.
...and that's the bottom line because Mate de Vita said so.
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2009 Feb 20 at 16:01 UTC
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aaronjer
*****'n Admin
2005 Mar 21 • 5046
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I stopped before finishing the first line. If you can't be bothered to spell it correctly then I certainly can't be bothered to read it.
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2009 Feb 20 at 19:37 UTC
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8 man kinda dull
I drink to forget but I always remember.
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2009 Feb 21 at 00:48 UTC
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eDan Co.
Mighty Typist
2007 Sep 24 • 2921
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the_cloud_system said: 8 man kinda dull
8 is a bad rating?
And I'm with Aaronjer on this one.
May contain traces of invisible text.
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2009 Feb 21 at 11:57 UTC
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I stop at the first line of the misspell but then i went on to the next sentence
Make awkward sexual advances, not war. Down Rodeo said: Dammit, this was the one place that didn't have this, but noooooo, molkman pisses all over that 
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2009 Feb 21 at 15:56 UTC
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good not very interesting thats what i ment
I drink to forget but I always remember.
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2009 Feb 22 at 01:51 UTC
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NatureJay
SJA: Commander of Ruthless Abuse
2005 Mar 23 • 1871
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There are two misspellings in the first line and you do it again in line seven unless you actually mean why will.
AABBCDEB/EFF?GGGG
you rhymed rage with rage and I don't think you know what swooning is.
Uh, more work needed?
100% natural, no antibiotics, and bloodgrass-fed
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2009 Feb 22 at 02:03 UTC
— Ed. 2009 Feb 22 at 02:03 UTC
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ive written a few poems here read one
Cravings give in to the darkest desires, your proximity of insanity begins to higher.
Darkness comes closer and trys to creep in, you can almost feel the need within.
It's so close now you can't hardly resist, it itches inside to not persist.
Give in to your needs, bite down and enjoy, now is the time....your inhumanity feeds.
But even then, I had my honor. The largest Banora White tree grew on a wealthy man's estate. It was rumored, that those apples tasted the best, but I never stole from that tree, because the wealthy man's son, was my friend...
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2009 Feb 22 at 07:02 UTC
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Down Rodeo
Cap'n Moth of the Firehouse
2007 Oct 19 • 5486
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xXJigsaw23Xx said: can't hardly
Just no.
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2009 Feb 22 at 13:59 UTC
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never said it was good i just wrote it lol
But even then, I had my honor. The largest Banora White tree grew on a wealthy man's estate. It was rumored, that those apples tasted the best, but I never stole from that tree, because the wealthy man's son, was my friend...
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2009 Feb 22 at 17:54 UTC
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