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Well we had to write a song for English today so I decided to write this one. I want feedback please!
Verse 1:
You put me through so much,
But I still stay with you.
I'm afraid to be,
The only one without you.
I can't stand sitting here all alone
When I could be with you
Chorus:
But I'm all alone
Waiting for that special someone
You used to be
The only one for me, but
Verse 2:
I'm over you now.
I can't be with you now
You put me through so much
But I finally broke
Away from you
Chorus:
But I'm all alone
Waiting for that special someone
You used to be
The only one for me, but
Break:
I'm lost and confused, but I'm better off without you
I'm lost and confused, but I'm better off without you
Ending:
Now as I sit here
Thinking of that special someone.
I still think back on all the great times we had,
but too bad, its over now
Chorus:
But I'm all alone
Waiting for that special someone
You used to be
The only one for me, but
Its over now
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2005 May 5 at 03:03 UTC
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Generic.
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2005 May 5 at 03:10 UTC
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NatureJay
SJA: Commander of Ruthless Abuse
2005 Mar 23 • 1871
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Ribbon's darts of criticism fly true. It's not bad, but there have been a bunch of songs like it, and there will continue to be more as time goes on.
100% natural, no antibiotics, and bloodgrass-fed
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2005 May 5 at 03:36 UTC
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Yea, I kinda figured, I wrote it in about 10 minutes :-\....
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2005 May 5 at 12:41 UTC
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echidna3
Captain Signupnow
2005 Apr 4 • -201
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if you spent 30 or 60 mins, maybe you could write a good song
i dont like signatures. although there are some good ones out there
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2005 May 5 at 14:34 UTC
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I only had 10 minutes in class to write it 
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2005 May 5 at 23:46 UTC
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Excuse me while I steal those lyrics and record a song... 
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2005 May 6 at 01:00 UTC
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a_banana
He's an Ug_Man!
2005 May 3 • -591
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im sure it is good enough for super to get reconised, and launch himself in to a life of fame and fortune, driving himself deeper in to the capitalistic bowels of our over worked body of government and pop culture..
then he probly will burn out in a mater of minutes. but anyway the song is ok.
<superjer> What? It is? Where? Huh? Hey -- scones!
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2005 May 6 at 01:24 UTC
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NatureJay
SJA: Commander of Ruthless Abuse
2005 Mar 23 • 1871
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Sovjet Umen should do a cover of it.... actually, they've already done some totally hot love songs.
100% natural, no antibiotics, and bloodgrass-fed
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2005 May 6 at 03:30 UTC
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echidna3
Captain Signupnow
2005 Apr 4 • -201
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it sorta helps if u spell it right
i dont like signatures. although there are some good ones out there
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2005 May 6 at 09:40 UTC
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a_banana
He's an Ug_Man!
2005 May 3 • -591
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are you raly one to talk about spelling mastakes? i have seen many in your post's
<superjer> What? It is? Where? Huh? Hey -- scones!
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2005 May 6 at 18:38 UTC
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NatureJay
SJA: Commander of Ruthless Abuse
2005 Mar 23 • 1871
574 ₧
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It goes both ways.
100% natural, no antibiotics, and bloodgrass-fed
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2005 May 6 at 21:11 UTC
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echidna3
Captain Signupnow
2005 Apr 4 • -201
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i spell wrong on purpose, bcos im too lazy
i dont like signatures. although there are some good ones out there
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2005 May 6 at 22:51 UTC
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a_banana
He's an Ug_Man!
2005 May 3 • -591
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oh me too, and im not good at spelling.
<superjer> What? It is? Where? Huh? Hey -- scones!
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2005 May 7 at 02:05 UTC
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echidna3
Captain Signupnow
2005 Apr 4 • -201
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suuuuure
i dont like signatures. although there are some good ones out there
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2005 May 7 at 23:50 UTC
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a_banana
He's an Ug_Man!
2005 May 3 • -591
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ya... i cant spell worth crap
<superjer> What? It is? Where? Huh? Hey -- scones!
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2005 May 8 at 00:44 UTC
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echidna3
Captain Signupnow
2005 Apr 4 • -201
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absolutely true. and correct your fucking grammar too
i dont like signatures. although there are some good ones out there
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2005 May 9 at 07:29 UTC
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a_banana
He's an Ug_Man!
2005 May 3 • -591
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ya why do you need to try to rub it in? it's not like this is english class or somthing. and your grammer is not the best either.
<superjer> What? It is? Where? Huh? Hey -- scones!
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2005 May 10 at 01:22 UTC
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Correction
This is English?
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2005 May 10 at 02:59 UTC
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a_banana
He's an Ug_Man!
2005 May 3 • -591
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what?
<superjer> What? It is? Where? Huh? Hey -- scones!
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2005 May 10 at 21:04 UTC
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echidna3
Captain Signupnow
2005 Apr 4 • -201
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i agree with mr smoke
i dont like signatures. although there are some good ones out there
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2005 May 13 at 10:59 UTC
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a_banana
He's an Ug_Man!
2005 May 3 • -591
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no suprise. i would think you would agree with your girlfriend.
<superjer> What? It is? Where? Huh? Hey -- scones!
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2005 May 14 at 21:04 UTC
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What?!
*slaps Mr. Smoke*
I can't believe you!
*storms off*
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2005 May 14 at 21:07 UTC
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a_banana
He's an Ug_Man!
2005 May 3 • -591
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ummm that was weard.
<superjer> What? It is? Where? Huh? Hey -- scones!
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2005 May 14 at 21:10 UTC
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echidna3
Captain Signupnow
2005 Apr 4 • -201
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what the fuck is weard?
i dont like signatures. although there are some good ones out there
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2005 May 15 at 09:42 UTC
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