Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)
2009 Nov 13 • 2045
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So I've been working on a song for this LoL song contest. Could I get some feedback on what I have thusfar?
Cappin' Temo
Edit: So I don't have to scroll to the middle of the page, here's the most recent version:
Toxic Shot
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2012 Jun 7 at 14:12 PDT
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SRAW
Rocket Man
2007 Nov 6 • 2525
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the samples or whatever it is of the kid going 1 2 3 4 is fucking annoying
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2012 Jun 7 at 14:39 PDT
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That's the best fucking part you slut.
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2012 Jun 7 at 14:59 PDT
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I like the vocal samples, but your arp wubb sounds well shit. Not just the wave modelling / tone, but the mastering (less attack, lower master plz), and the phrasing of the drops. Drop the drops, dig it? There is a lot of good stuff going on here, clean it up a bit, replace the wub, extend at least 2x (add a bridge!), and you're in business. Guh they flirt dangerously close to creepy but I really like the Temo vocal samples...good work, keep it up, post more as it progresses.
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2012 Jun 7 at 15:09 PDT
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Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)
2009 Nov 13 • 2045
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Thanks Pheonix, that's exactly what I was looking for.
It'll be probably just under 3 minutes when it's done, because it's for a contest and the max limit is 3 minutes. If it's well-recieved, I'll make a full length version... we'll see.
So just to make sure... do you hate the wobbles entirely, or just the tones of them? And, should I just drop them an octave, or keep the high points where they are and drop the low points an octave? I'll mess around with the synth and see if I can get a better sound out of it.
Also, the vocals are definitely staying, so QQ moar SRAW. The song is supposed to be based around a champion from LoL, and I chose Teemo.
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2012 Jun 7 at 16:27 PDT
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I put this up on my page.
but everybody is like 12 years old.
I drink to forget but I always remember.
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2012 Jun 8 at 15:02 PDT
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buq25
2008 Jul 5 • 583
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Showed it to my friend, he said the only thing he didn't like about it was that at the end it got repeditive.
I'm not really into dubstep (which I assume this is(lol, temostep)) what I'd prefere would be if the WUBWUBZ followed the beat of the song.
Also, I would like that the high pitch sound would lower after the drop.
Today's post brought to you by the letter: "heck".
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2012 Jun 8 at 16:27 PDT
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2012 Jun 9 at 02:38 PDT
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Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)
2009 Nov 13 • 2045
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Wow, thanks guys :D
I just got back from rafting, and the GW2 beta is going on, so I'm not gonna be working on it 'til Monday. The feedback is much appreciated, and thanks for posting it on FB cloud :D
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2012 Jun 9 at 16:47 PDT
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aaronjer
*****'n Admin
2005 Mar 21 • 4940
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Hey, here's a thought: Stop playing stupid games for silly girls.
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2012 Jun 10 at 00:55 PDT
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my mom is playing gw2 beta weekend also... 
I drink to forget but I always remember.
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2012 Jun 10 at 05:14 PDT
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Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)
2009 Nov 13 • 2045
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Here's another WIP. Tried to capitalize on the creepiness of things and push it to the next level... did it work?
Initiate Temostep
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2012 Jun 13 at 12:31 PDT
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lol on scouts code.
I drink to forget but I always remember.
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2012 Jun 13 at 18:28 PDT
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aaronjer
*****'n Admin
2005 Mar 21 • 4940
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It's not okay to have fun doing things I don't like.
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2012 Jun 13 at 18:52 PDT
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2012 Jun 13 at 18:56 PDT
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Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)
2009 Nov 13 • 2045
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But seriously... better? Worse?
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2012 Jun 13 at 19:45 PDT
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buq25
2008 Jul 5 • 583
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The first third of the song is better. After the drop I can't hear any difference.
Today's post brought to you by the letter: "heck".
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2012 Jun 14 at 14:18 PDT
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aaronjer
*****'n Admin
2005 Mar 21 • 4940
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I don't get the connection. But I have been standing uncomfortably close to teenage girls a lot lately!
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2012 Jun 14 at 17:24 PDT
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Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)
2009 Nov 13 • 2045
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buq25 said: The first third of the song is better. After the drop I can't hear any difference.
Any difference from what?
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2012 Jun 14 at 19:17 PDT
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buq25
2008 Jul 5 • 583
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Rockbomb said: buq25 said: The first third of the song is better. After the drop I can't hear any difference.
Any difference from what? From the old song.
Today's post brought to you by the letter: "heck".
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2012 Jun 15 at 14:37 PDT
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2012 Jun 17 at 18:41 PDT
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Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)
2009 Nov 13 • 2045
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Guys... I just realized something...
I ship out in a week :O
Imma be busy the next couple days, so idk if imma have time to get this done or not :/
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2012 Jun 17 at 18:46 PDT
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shhhheeeetttt
I drink to forget but I always remember.
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2012 Jun 17 at 20:40 PDT
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Rockbomb
Dog fucker (but in a good way now)
2009 Nov 13 • 2045
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Fuck, I forgot to submit this before I left for basic...
I would post the final version, but my comPuter is still in Colorado. Im gonna try to get it sent up here ASAP, and Ill post it then.
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2012 Aug 30 at 04:43 PDT
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