Short story

Short story

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2007 Oct 24 • 990
13 ₧
i wrote this story for English class ( homework ) we had to write a little short story . I decided that i will write a horrorish story . of course i started to write it about 30 minutes before school , ( when i had more than 3 days to write it )
just keep in mind that im from Romania , and im the best at English from my class .. so don't be to harsh about the story ..

the night before Halloween

It was the night before Halloween , a few minutes to midnight ...
Little Timmy Sawier was walking along the sidewalk in the den of night ,
he had been searching all night for a costume that would fit him .
Timmy had arrived at the edge of town but still no costume ,
he had spotted an old house - it was said that a lost soul of an old woman ,said to be a witch, haunted that forsaken house -
Timmy had to pass a cemetery on his way to the house ,
although he was scared , little Timmy was desperate .
While making his way trough the dark , cold cemetery , he started to hear some noises, he had never heard before ,
the noises got stronger the more Timmy made his way into the cemetery ,
he could now hear growls of a strange sort ,
" its only stray dogs " - he said to himself ..
as he walked deeper the growls changed into whispers ,
" Its all in my mind! there is no one there! " - Timmy encouraged his self .
Timmy was struck by a fear that he never felt before , when he saw a dark figure lurking in the shadows ,
he could hear it coming closer , but couldn't see it . his heart pounded , his muscles tightened, petrified by fear , he couldn't move.
Then he felt something brush against his shoulder , then a whisper : " get out ! " and again and again , louder and louder " GET OUT !! " .
Timmy ran as fast as he could , but the voices seemed to follow him wherever he ran .
Then finally ! he spots the exit ! as Timmy makes his way ,crying , towards the exit . he spots the dark figure from before .
He stops dead in his tracks , stunned . The dark figure moves closer to him , slowly reaching out towards him ,
and then ....

Wtf is that ? its a bird ! no its a plane ! amm maybe its a plastic bag . NO ! its SUPERJER ! the greatest super hero ever!
2008 Apr 13 at 02:46 PDT

2005 Mar 20 • 6584
...and then it eats his heart.


2008 Apr 13 at 04:59 PDT
Down Rodeo
Cap'n Moth of the Firehouse

Find the Hole II Participation Medal
2007 Oct 19 • 5486
57,583 ₧
I will read this at some point when my eyes are no longer bleeding. I found a site called TVTropes. Don't ask if you don't know.

My point here is that at the moment I really can't read through dense text like that due to having read through literal screeds of, well, internet crap over the past weekend. I guess I'm not hardcore.
2008 Apr 13 at 17:44 PDT
Count Adelaide

Roar Of The Tigress Medal
2007 Jun 24 • 84
68 ₧
Make awkward sexual advances, not war.
Down Rodeo said:
Dammit, this was the one place that didn't have this, but noooooo, molkman pisses all over that
2008 May 8 at 14:09 PDT
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