shigidy

2005 Nov 25 • 177
-1 ₧

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=apY5sFNQFHM&eurl=http%3A%2F%2Fwww%2Efreewebs%2Ecom%2Ffuzzydicepro%2Fhalomentos%2Ehtm

Leave a comment PLZ!

Tell me how to make it better too.

NatureJay
SJA: Commander of Ruthless Abuse


2005 Mar 22 • 1871
574 ₧

Shiggy shiggy bing bang:

I've watched a few of your videos now and it seems like in a few of them you've seemed to use a song as the backdrop, sort of the foundation of the joke. The problem with this is that, in doing so, you end up taking a long time to set up. By the time the joke appears, we've all known what it was for a long time. Tightening it up a little might help in the overall delivery, otherwise, if you're really stuck on the idea of having the whole song play out, there needs to be more happening, not just characters walking past the same stock background like a Hanna Barbara cartoon without dialogue.

The_sloth

2007 Feb 21 • -1274

Lol Not really funny but ok...

shigidy

2005 Nov 25 • 177
-1 ₧

Nature thx for your advice. I use songs a lot b/c I hate actually acting and using my voice and my friends are lazy loser who just sit around and wont help me.

Brad it was the halo 3 movie trailer therefore www.Bungie.net made this video so they took his helmet off. You can't do it in halo 2 unless maybe with a modder.

Mike_The_StickMa

2007 Jan 13 • 60
12 ₧

wut da hell?!?!?!?

singing?!?!?!

that video is retarded(no offense)

Nezumi
Asshole Admin


2005 Mar 26 • 785
175 ₧

The end, with him jumping into the enemies at the conclusion of the song, actually fit really well. Like NJ said just tigten it up. It's a clever gag but it's bogged down by some unnecessary bits.

Mike_The_StickMa

2007 Jan 13 • 60
12 ₧

yea but i still think the singing is horrible